I Write Like...

I write like
Neil Gaiman

I Write Like. Analyze your writing!

Posted the first chapter of my new-still-in-development novel and, according to I Write Like...well, see above.

Not sure how much stock you want to put in a gadget on the Internet ....but it made me smile.

I write like
James Joyce

I Write Like. Analyze your writing!

Chapter two and three had me shifting gears...

I write like
Anne Rice

I Write Like. Analyze your writing!

and chapter four just got strange...

At that point I thought it was safer just to stop.

It's the little touches....

And another season of Game of Thrones comes to a brilliant and bloody denouement...

One of the things that George R.R. Martin and the writing crew at HBO do extremely well are short, deliberative scenes that illuminate and deepen specific characters, their relationships and their choices so very, very deftly.  This season has a number of scenes that have been superbly illustrative of this fact and I'm not referring to the jarring horror of the Red Wedding.  Here are a few of the scenes that make Game of Throne one of the very best shows to grace our screens in a very long time...starting with my personal favorite moment from Season 3.


Tyrion takes a seat

Dinner with Bolton

Jamie & Brianne and the Kingslayer's bathtime

Accounting with Oleanna

Meeting new people....

and killing them...

and lastly, more of the Tyrion and Bronn banter.

Not sure if I can wait another nine months for the next fix...

King in the Car Park

Wired has a neat gallery of photos (and links) regarding updates on the recent discovery of the skeletal remains of Richard III under a car park in Leicester.

If you, like me, you have an unhealthy obsession with both archaeology and the Tudor eras, you will be excited....

Check it out here.

Coming Home....

Cmdr. Chris Hadfield is on his way back down from a five month stint as Commander of the ISS.  He has probably done more for the education, popularization and visibility of the space program than anyone in recent memory (including Mohawk guy from JPL).  Before leaving, he recorded (with David Bowie;s permission) a new cover version of "Space Oddity".   If you do nothing else today, give it a listen and take a second to marvel at all aspects of this - recorded from orbit!

"...bitter as salt and stone...."

All that you held most dear you will put by
and leave behind you: and this is the arrow
the longbow of your exile first lets fly.

You will come to know how bitter as salt and stone
is the bread of others, how hard the way that goes
up and down stairs that never are your own.

Paradiso -Dante

Damn.  That dude can write.

Source: http://whatever.scalzi.com/2013/04/04/the-big-idea-guy-gavriel-kay-2/

Cry "Havoc" and let slip the muddy Jake of spring

Historical Fiction: Delving into the Age

"Kit Tyburn leaned on the bench, his back pressing against the canted timbered wall, surveying the four pasteboard cards in his hands critically.  A worn cyclopean knave of hearts gazed back, accompanied by two clubs, four hearts and a wistful diamond queen."  - Excerpt, The Jesuit Letter

Historical fiction is a genre that often carries the illusion of ease in its genetic code.  To the uninitiated, it is simpler to pull from the pages of history - you don't need to invent, you don't need to create, you just need to pillage the past.   It's all there for the taking.

The reality is that historical fiction requires hard research, a critical eye and the ability to parse from history the day-to-day norms and conditions that govern your characters and your settings.  History buffs are often well-versed, very particular and on occasion, will obsessively guard their "eras", noting any permutation or deviation with judicious care.  Obvious errors pull the reader out of the period and the setting, detracting from the story-line and the overall credibility of the tale.  Research, context and, more importantly, being able to reflect and mirror the feel for the era in the story, are critical elements in making historical fiction work.

That is not to say that you cannot bend history to suit story.  Indeed, it often becomes a necessity.  Good historical fiction winds its way through reality with deft prose and respect for the era and its fundamentals but in fiction, the need to cut, edit and interpret history to serve your plot comes up more often than you think.  Both geography and time need to bend to the will of the author if the story demands it but in a way that ideally respects the reader, the era and the circumstances.  You can move a hill, shift a date, add a character to a critical time and place, but you need to avoid anachronisms and blatant or egregious retro-fitting of history if you want to keep the interest of your readers, and your own credibility...

Writers of historical fiction often need to embed their story in as much reality as it can bear, but not too much.  Most readers don't really want a story that reflects a well-loved character dying of dysentery or an infection from a tooth abscess.  You don't need to know about the toiletry habits of the typical Roman, or how infrequently people in the Middle Ages bathed - unless it is specific and particular to advancing the plot.  When writing historical fiction, the copious research and meticulous attention needs to be levied with the need for story, advancing your plot, and a strong,  vivid and evocative tale to tell, not the reality of medieval sanitary conditions

Writers need to be careful that research doesn't overwhelm storyline.  It is very easy to suffer from excessive inclusion - the need to make certain that your depth of research is reflected on the page - driving the reader to distraction with miscellaneous detail and context that is unneeded and fails to drive the plot.  It is very easy to get distracted by the need to explain and the temptation, when a terrific piece of research needs to be incorporated into a scene, to make the scene about the research rather than the character or the story.  When an everyday event takes you days or weeks to research and plan, the urge to have that fictional moment encompass more to justify all the hard work that went into it, can be an easy and common trap for the writer.  The excerpt above opened a brief scene of card-play that took up a total of two and half pages, mostly dialogue, intended to advance the characters and their situation.  It also involved a significant amount of detailed research into playing cards, their use in Elizabethan England, the types of playing cards available and detailed rules for several different card games, research that included about thirty hands of primero at the kitchen table to get the gambling and betting elements correct.  The original version was almost double in length and covered several hands worth of play, until I re-read it and decided that the vast majority of non-primero playing readers would find it tedious.  Cut-down in its prime, the research lives but much reduced.  Similarly a scene with a dog-fight was cut entirely, even though the intriguing and fascinating world of badger-baiting did beckon seductively.

Historical fiction is best when the author is painting in the corners, dropping in the innocuous and oft un-noted details that help make the era and the landscape come alive in ways that the reader barely overtly notices, but builds and supports the overall world and setting.  It is found in the canted timber walls and the worn pasteboards, the sour warm ale and the mud-caked cobbles, the taste of spiced wine and the rancid stench of a urine-soaked alley.  The research must lead the writer, helping him enter into that world, where they can critically pick the elements and moments to entrap in prose, pulling the reader into their time-warp, into a world and an engrossing story.

It's all about painting in those corners.